Evan Petoyan
Miss Kim
Grade 10 (1)
10/22/09
Hitlers speech Mein Kampf was directed twoard every non-jewish person in the world. Hitler staes that Jews are a symbol of what is evil in our world. His Skill at using propaganda and rhetoric convinved the country Germany to turn against the Jews. Hitler not only shows how easy it is to persuaded people uing propoganda and rhetoric but that it easily can be used for bad. Propganda and retoric is a very powerfull tool.
Hitler gains his pathos by scaring the people of germany into beliving that the jews are bad. "Here he stops at nothing, and his villeness becomes so giagantic that no one need be surprised if among our people he personification of the devil as the symbol of all evil assumes te living shape of the Jew." Hitler gains his respect and authority over the german people by scaring them into beliving in whatever he wants. Hiler terrified his country into trusting him.
In my eyes Hitler has a good ethos whith his audience. The only way he gained his ethos is from scaring his audience by giving them false information about Jews. He scares his audience into beileving him and trusting him. His audience sees that Hitler is a powerful persuasive leader who distrusts the Jewish people. Hitler wanted this he wanted to them to see how powerful he was and how evil the Jews can be. Hitler fed his audience slander about Jews, they bought it and trusted Hitler
its pretty good but you coould work on it.
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hey u should spell check it, u have a lot of errors
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ReplyDelete1.You did not put in your MLA heading at the beginning. Make sure to get that in before Miss Kim grades!
ReplyDelete2.Your title was ok, but you can come up with something else such as Hitler's Lies.
3.You did well on the background of Hitler.
4.In your second paragraph, you forgot to put the source paragraph for your quote.
5.I agree that Hitler had a good ethos because he was a very good and convincing speaker.
6. In the first paragraph, you misspelled "twoard", "staes", "retoric", "uing", "Propganda", and "powerfull". In the second paragraph you forgot to capitalize Germany, German and Jew. Also in the second paragraph, you misspelled "te", "beliving", "villeness",and "giagantic". In the last paragraph, you misspelled "eys" and "whith".